Not bad.
Put aside the lame music, the lack of sound effects, and the cheesy dialogue, this is a good movie. Especially for a first submission. I gave you a five, simply because you ovbiously worked very hard on it, and didn't just submit the first crappy thing you made, which is refreshing. Good job man. Keep up the good work, I'm lookin forward to part 2.
Your friendly neighborhood Cynic,
Screamer